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March 15, 2010
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My wings ripped out
they have no grace
I tainted heaven
left to wander earth
fallen from the sky
left without a purpose
my head hangs low
with my heart beating fast
my mind thinks of questions
pounding and pondering left with
no answers, no resolution
I seek what I should not
I am stained with it

Im torn and tattered
the glow of the halo dim
It's dying out
so with my last glance at light
I am cast away

Wounded inside and out
my immortal life
spent in the dark and alone
and my heart left cold

with a shattered soul
and defeat on my back
I take steps
making time evolve to hate
with no song left to sing
I trade my old life in
I wont look back
I am fallen
i read a book recently on the fallen
i wrote this in class when we had a sub :D
heres a link to the image [link] :)

UPDATE: This is the second poem I have left on my account after looking through and removing all other poetry sans my first ever one: Reaching a place. It remained primarily because at this current moment 73 lovely people made it a favourite, which is the highest for any of the poems i ever uploaded. Thank you everyone.
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karinamore123 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  New member Student Writer
That was beautiful and you can tell that It has a deep meaning
animelover74 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
I like!
darkgothicmonkey Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
was the book hush,hush btw ths iz really good
SomebodysWish Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nope, but i have read that book, really liked it (:
and thank you :D
darkgothicmonkey Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wat was the book called than i read alot
WednesdayJames Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it! So very very good. If there's any way to express how I feel, any way at all I would.
SomebodysWish Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much for your comment i appreciate it
im glad you like it
and also thank ou for the fave :XD:
lilnutta10 Featured By Owner May 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Love your work
* Is proud*
Lol :heart:
SomebodysWish Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you
S2GlassSlippersS2 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Excellent job on this. :) Very very beautifully written :aww:
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