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My wings ripped out
they have no grace
I tainted heaven
left to wander earth
fallen from the sky
left without a purpose
my head hangs low
with my heart beating fast
my mind thinks of questions
pounding and pondering left with
no answers, no resolution
I seek what I should not
I am stained with it

Im torn and tattered
the glow of the halo dim
It's dying out
so with my last glance at light
I am cast away

Wounded inside and out
my immortal life
spent in the dark and alone
and my heart left cold

with a shattered soul
and defeat on my back
I take steps
making time evolve to hate
with no song left to sing
I trade my old life in
I wont look back
I am fallen
i read a book recently on the fallen
i wrote this in class when we had a sub :D
heres a link to the image [link] :)

UPDATE: This is the second poem I have left on my account after looking through and removing all other poetry sans my first ever one: Reaching a place. It remained primarily because at this current moment 73 lovely people made it a favourite, which is the highest for any of the poems i ever uploaded. Thank you everyone.
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animelover74 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
I like!
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darkgothicmonkey Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
was the book hush,hush btw ths iz really good
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SomebodysWish Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nope, but i have read that book, really liked it (:
and thank you :D
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darkgothicmonkey Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wat was the book called than i read alot
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WednesdayJames Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it! So very very good. If there's any way to express how I feel, any way at all I would.
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SomebodysWish Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much for your comment i appreciate it
im glad you like it
and also thank ou for the fave :XD:
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lilnutta10 Featured By Owner May 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome
Love your work
* Is proud*
Lol :heart:
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SomebodysWish Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you
:hug:
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S2GlassSlippersS2 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Excellent job on this. :) Very very beautifully written :aww:
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SomebodysWish Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks you and thanks for the fav :hug:
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